Journal #2 The importance of peer teaching

I handed in our 5th genre. I draw a poster of writing center. Speaking of writing center, I always think about writing center. I mainly wrote followings, Organizing: how might you shape or organize your idea? Drafting: How can you connect your thoughts in a coherent flow? Revising: How can you re-see and reconsider your large and small scale choices? Editing: How can you improve your sentence and grammar skills? However, in peer reviewing, the peer mentioned that this poster is not suitable for our topic. So, I should rewrite. However, I really appreciated the peer reviewer because I have a chance to revise. I think that peer teaching system is really helpful.